Great story, fell in love with the characters. But whenever I was really getting deep into the story, a grammatical or sentence structure error would pop up pulling me away from the story. It got kind of annoying because I really invest myself in my reading when buying into a series of books. It’s not an author issue, more like an editing issue. Maybe at the beginning the author didn’t have a great team to assist him so I hope the second and future books afterwards show improvement. There are so many other authors that write fantasy series books but I want to give this computer repairman a chance. I’m sure this is his passion.

Outstanding book; kept me riveted the entire time

A good story with surprising allies. A bit more editing is needed to make it a better read.

Very enjoyable read!

Entertaining, good characters, page turner

Fast past action in a marvelous world full of intriguing characters,it can’t be put down till you’ve read to the end.

This was a very good story and is a great first installment of what could turn out to be a great series but it feels unoriginal. It reminds me too much of Lord of the Rings. Which isn’t a horrible thing, but it’s hard to be entranced by a story you’ve heard a thousand times.