The plot behind the main characters kept me interested in reading through until the end. However, the author didn’t allow much insight or depth to their nature. I would have appreciated a much more in-depth reveal of their character beyond simply moving to the next scene.

It starts rather slow and boring. Once you learn some of the characters, things begin moving quite rapidly and get more intriguing. By the end of Book One, you don’t want it to stop.

Loved this! Can’t wait to read the next one.

This book was endlessly fascinating as Myranda lives only to survive and then finds a greater purpose. As well the enigma that is Leo/Lain. The only thing I did not like about the book was that it ended.

I really enjoyed reading this book.

First of all, I liked the fact that it was free! The second book in the series may not be free, but I’m already excited to read it anyway!! This author has written a masterpiece! I was interested because of the description, extremely intrigued by the first paragraph, and in love by the 20th page!!! I highly recommend this book; it is one of the best I have ever read. Trust me. I have read a lot. I finished this book in about 3 days. GET THIS BOOK!!!!!! If you’re looking for a book for a project, or just for fun, this book will satisfy you!! Woah, though. Just... woah. 🤩 P.S: Be happy!!! The Lord is here!!!!!!! 😁🍥❤️🍓

Lallo’s mystical fantasy is convoluted and makes abrupt changes, but he ties up most of the loose ends eventually. And a cliffhanger ending, nooooooo!

I found myself compelled to finish this first story. I felt an urgency to follow and see where the tale went in it's journey. Great characters, from irascible and somewhat immoral wizards to very tainted soldiers and politicians. I did find Myranda a little tedious at times. Even while I could agree with her anti war, anti killing attitude, she did become a little holier than thou at times. Overall I found it to be an interesting and good story.

I thought this book was beautifully written. Yes there may have been some things that weren’t perfect but what I really care for is the story line. A few grammatical errors and spelling mistakes aren’t a big deal. It was a wonderful story with creative characters and I cannot wait to continue it!

But not great. If it’s just a prequel to try and get you to by the rest of the trilogy ( which I guess now includes a fourth un-finished book) couldn’t it have been a lot shorter and left out all the tedious predictable stuff? And maybe the main characters shouldn’t do so much dumb irrational stuff and make bad decisions. And maybe fewer miracles to save the hero’s or maybe fewer miraculous unbelievabe performances by the heroes to save the day, but then turn right around and do something dumb to get themselves in trouble again? It’s an interesting premise for a story, but I probably won’t read anymore of the books, certainly not if I have to pay for them, from the library maybe?